Emma Pool Critique- (From Eizabeth Jassin)

Ready Set Laugh

This package was great! I liked the way you opened, answering and telling the audience exactly what Improv is. The tone in your voice was excited and engaging. There was a nice flow of sources (going from a primary source to more general secondary source students.) Each sound bite contained relevant information which flowed nicely with content.
I only noticed one sound bite that felt cut off. And you already critiqued this in front of the class, but your own audio was covered by outside natural sound at times.
Overall, it was awesome!!!

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